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Why  is  it
we  never  see
just  how  precious
others  can  be  
i hear  you now
as  i  did  then
your  laugh your voice
those  little  things

I  reach  for  those  moments
but  they  are  gone
they  live  only  in
times  gone  by
You've left  and  now  you  see
no  more  times  can  be

I miss you  Dad
62 years gone  too fast
especially  for  the  ones  left  here
you  have  left  your  mark
and  forever will  be

Rest  in Peace
.....;(
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talentwithin Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2012  Hobbyist
thanks candy xo
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talentwithin Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2012  Hobbyist
yes HarleeRider sadly i lost my Dad recently xxoo
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candysamuels Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
aww sorry to hear that Len..
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HarLeeRider Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2012
Hi Len!! :wave: What a wonderful writing, but may I dare ask?? .... is this poem relevant to you somehow directly?? :hug: Lee :worry:
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talentwithin Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2012  Hobbyist
Thankyou xo
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isitdarkenoughx Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Wow. This is a completely heart-breaking piece. You did a great job at allowing the emotion to pour through. +fav:
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isitdarkenoughx Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I meant: :+fav:
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